Wednesday, July 9, 2008

First writing

Today we wrote a persuasive paragraph in summer school. This is for we wrote!

You shoud let me buy a dog. To start with, it will make me less stressed. Now I am an interational school student, I have to study hard in a foreign language. Also, a dog help me make new friends other dog owners because there are many people walking dog and I can talk with them about dogs. All in all, it is a good idea for me to have a dog.

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